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Pages After Dark's avatar

I agree with the others about the imagery. Your descriptions and how you weave your words together make this an effectively creepy read. Keep writing, fellow horror writer!

Jay Wilcox's avatar

"One girl’s spine bowed so deeply it looked like her ribs might pierce her skin."

Damn, what an image! This whole piece is visceral and raw. I feel it

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